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Is It Cruel to Keep Animals In Cages?
I believe that it is cruel to keep animals in cages because all animals have rights and being kept in cages all their lives gives them no rights at all an they are under total control by the people who are keeping them in cages.
Imagine if you were put in a cage so small you couldn't stand up or stretch out your arms and all you could do is sit down and be unable to move you body around.
Most people in 1st world countries would not even think of doing that to other humans but yet just down the road at their local zoo helpless animals are being kept in those claustrophobic cage so us human beings can have the privilege to see those animals.
If we wouldn't do it to to other humans why is it right to do to to animals, what makes that right?
I personally think it is wrong to keep helpless animals in cages for most or all of their lives and I believe that this issue should be widely know throughout Australia that these animals, these poor animals are being kept in these tiny cages where they cant even move around, all they can do is sit there not knowing what might happen.
I believe that it is cruel to keep animals in cages because all animals have rights and being kept in cages all their lives gives them no rights at all an they are under total control by the people who are keeping them in cages.
Imagine if you were put in a cage so small you couldn't stand up or stretch out your arms and all you could do is sit down and be unable to move you body around.
Most people in 1st world countries would not even think of doing that to other humans but yet just down the road at their local zoo helpless animals are being kept in those claustrophobic cage so us human beings can have the privilege to see those animals.
If we wouldn't do it to to other humans why is it right to do to to animals, what makes that right?
I personally think it is wrong to keep helpless animals in cages for most or all of their lives and I believe that this issue should be widely know throughout Australia that these animals, these poor animals are being kept in these tiny cages where they cant even move around, all they can do is sit there not knowing what might happen.
Persuasive genre | Score 1-5 | |
Audience | The writer’s capacity to orient, engage and persuade the reader | |
Text structure | The organisation of the structural components of a persuasive text (introduction, body and conclusion) into an appropriate and effective text structure | |
Ideas | The selection, relevance and elaboration of ideas for a persuasive argument | |
Persuasive devices | The use of a range of persuasive devices to enhance the writer’s position and persuade the reader | |
Vocabulary | The range and precision of contextually appropriate language choices | |
Cohesion | The control of multiple threads and relationships across the text, achieved through the use of grammatical elements (referring words, text connectives, conjunctions) and lexical elements (substitutions, repetitions, word associations) | |
Paragraphing | The segmenting of text into paragraphs that assists the reader to follow the line of argument | |
Sentence structure | The production of grammatically correct, structurally sound and meaningful sentences | |
Punctuation | The use of correct and appropriate punctuation to aid the reading of the text | |
Spelling | The accuracy of spelling and the difficulty of the words used | |
TOTAL | /50 |
